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by The Poetic Child Jul 16, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships
Every inch of my aching body is hurting and starting to burn I just want you to understand its my heart that you must learn I just cant even stay still My heart is making me die *cough cough* skip this line thats another year gone by I'm dieing with-out you slowly Yet you don't even know it I'm just needing you back here My love i will show it I'm promising you I life like no other and we don't even have to be Like your sister or my brother I just want to be together To be with the girl i love so much I lay down day dreaming of you Dreaming of the last time we touched The Day that i hugged you and gave you a small kiss the day i rested my head on you You just make my life bliss I'm trying to really see if i will ever get a 3rd shot and this is not ordinary love oh please trust me its not It is so much more then that I don't care if i am fifteen i love you so very much i love you more then anything Yes i am young and yes i fell to hard but i just want to be wit you cause your my beeping heart and when your gone that means my heart is missing but my brain is still here and i still think of us kissing at that night at the movies when i kissed your soft lips to show you i love you and that you make my heart do flips You really really do Katie i don't think you really see the only guy out there To give you love is me I wasn't lying when i was saying that I'm not your ordinary man i have a heart like no other I'll love you all i can and ill give you every part of me I'm trying to give you my heart so at the moment you realize I just don't want to be apart I love you SO very much Katie right now i see here crying its not suicide cause your killing me I'm right here.....dieing...
by Tina Carr AKA Snickers
Grrrreat. Screw the down voters, it doesn't mean you're any less talented. They're just arrogant jerks with nothing better to do. Magnificent poems, even thought you didn't say everything you wanted to... Love Tina < 33
by Darkened Rose
I like this poem 5/5