by Krystal Jul 16, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Help,Help,Help |
by Rusheena
Wow. This is really brings awareness to a very grim topic. I like how you put yourself in the perspective of the victim; it makes it more real. |
by Baby Rainbow
That hits you hard. few grammer mistakes, but the poem was really good. very heavy topic and you write it well. |
by missy
Very sad poem, it touched me deeply. I always have a soft side for these types of poems that grips reality by the wrist. |
Oh wow........its all i can say. i dunno if i could say i enjoyed reading this cause it isn't a good situation but wow... |
by Krystal
If you comment on my poem I will coment on yours hope you like |