by m i s s k a t e l y n Jul 16, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
So Many Guys |
Uuuh i dont rly like that one. it needs more work and less saying im confused. uuh if u worked at this one it could be good. sry sry ur a wonderful writer but this poem isnt one of ur best im going to give u a 2\5. work on it, ur an amazing writer as i said b4. |
by reborn
Why are u confused? how does that affect ur mind, and heart? work on that. |
by reborn
Sorry but is that even a poem??? u obviously had a shitload of feelings that u could have put into words and write one great poem!! so i really think u settled for the easy way. 1/5. |