Roses In My Hand

As you stated beauty is in the eye of the beholder and that very much relates to your poem. One can only draw from it through the experiences that they've had. All in all great poem!

It was a short poem but in these whort lines you have expressed thosands of things. and this is an art. and i can feel that you are a grat writer. i loved you all poem and wait for see any new poem take care 5/5

Wow this was amazing.. definatly worth the brag. I liked how you made it so beautiful and creative. Amazing idea. "Crystal tear drops are burning" this was my favorite line.. very very powerful and full of inspiration. Well done.

I loved the imagery in this and the rhyming was very good aswell, usually i don't like rhyme but in this case you have incorporated it flawlessly and it really gives the piece a nice rhythm which carries through to the end despite the break in rhyme there. In fact my favourite stanza was the last one because it was different. An interesting write, i enjoyed it :)

I love the way this poem goes together.. You did a great job5/5