Clean White Sand

by {Miss} [A][L][L][I][S][O][N]   Jul 16, 2006


Isn't it
Ironic how the sand that held
Our sweating bodies
As we fell and forgot how to breathe
Can slip through my fingers
Just like you
As the week ended and so did we
And now
Clean white sand
Will slip into the sea of passion
So I can never
Find it's feeling
Again?

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  • 18 years ago

    by cassie

    That was great!! I like the comparison. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Excellent 5/5 Short ,sweet and to the point. love the style

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Sniffle. Sad, that was heart-touching. Short, but cutting.

    In a good way, though! It had a lot of emotion.

    //T.L.//

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