Comments : Misconceptions

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    I loved this poem! you really explained it all!

    i loved the part you wrote

    "Who said skinny is right?
    Now every girl holds her stomach tight.
    And as she eats she does quietly note,
    her disgusting fat will be gone when she sticks her finger down her throat."

    it really explains what really happens in teen life :)

    Thanks for the comment on my poem it means alot to me :)

  • 18 years ago

    by iheartu

    That was excellent, i think it showed really well the pressures teens today are faced with...keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxSilentScreamXx

    REALLY GREAT job. I love it.