You not Him!!

by bellATragedy   Jul 17, 2006


Mascara running down my cheek
Eyes are puffy, bodies weak

My heart is shattered, slowly mending
Nothing matters, Nothing exists

The doorbell rings, you look at me
Hair a mess, all full of dings

You laugh at me
I wonder why
You begin to smile
I begin to cry

You walk up to me and hug me tightly
I wipe my eyes and now I see

I don't need him
You love me more
I love you too
Of this I'm sure

You make me smile
He makes me cry
You make live
He makes me die

To you I say " I love you "
To him I say " Good Bye "

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brian King

    Very nice poem lots of strong points.

    first, however the title seems... misleading it makes sense but i just don't think it fits.

    the mix of 2 lines and 4 lines seems unprofessional but i understand why you put them inbetween the lines except for here
    "You walk up to me and hug me tightly
    I wipe my eyes and now I see"
    it seems, to me, you couldn't think of anything else to write

    you have a very good start "mascara" really attracted my attention for some reason.

    very good rhymes that flow well makes up for the "choppy" stanzas although you combine the two wonderfully at the end

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