Very nice poem lots of strong points.

first, however the title seems... misleading it makes sense but i just don't think it fits.

the mix of 2 lines and 4 lines seems unprofessional but i understand why you put them inbetween the lines except for here
"You walk up to me and hug me tightly
I wipe my eyes and now I see"
it seems, to me, you couldn't think of anything else to write

you have a very good start "mascara" really attracted my attention for some reason.

very good rhymes that flow well makes up for the "choppy" stanzas although you combine the two wonderfully at the end