It was more sad than anything else...but...hmm...well firstly this was interesting with content. The first stanza was really cool. The middle ones weren't really great to me but it was an interesting concept. In other words this was cool but not the style I like.
~Faith-less

Wow...this is really a very beautiful poem indeed, the last stanza is just amazing..infact the complete poem is excellent

all the best and take care
5/5

Beautiful poem...heartfelt. You are so right, we all die alone...no matter how many relationships we have with family and friends.

WOW... i really liked this poem..
the bitter truths of life... nice work..

Also, thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my work.. it meant a lot to me..

5.5

Much love,
Ipsita

Hey! Ur poem is so depressing!! Everything ok with ur life? Stay happy okies!! A good poem though cuz it made me feel sad..haha..write happier poems next time!! Take care! :)

Nice, if this is really what you written you sure must be someone lonely =\

Wonderful poem...The truth in your words is so powerful...It is sometimes most people feel the need to ignore for comfort, but you threw everything out so bluntly...Excellent job and congrats on winning the contest.

Sad but true I feel many of the words are true to form

I wont critize this poem because I don't have to. I just want to say that in life No one is ever alone. It sounds creepy to say but it's true. The thought of being alone is something that has yet to be proven. Though the feeling of being alone will always be felt.

Really good poem indeed.

Yes that is true we all do die alone. I thought it was well written. I think the best part of poem is usually the ending, which is always remembered, so I thought you nailed it. Nice Work. Please stop by and read my latest poen Nobody Knows. Thank you

Wow! thats a relly great poem. it has a lot of emotion. it really good

Sad, very touching, keep it up

Good poem!!!

I LIKE IT...IT WAS REALLY SAD! KEEP IT UP!!!

-kEeLa vAnG

It's a great piece of work! it's sad though, but great!

Yeah we all die alone but hey thats life though, you should check some of my poems out.

Hm. not too bad. well written indeed.

I really loved your poem it was wonderful and o so very truthful life and love sucks i feel sorry for those new ones coming into it. but loved the poem cant wait to hear more. 5/5

I like how you took thoughts, not fully constructed sentences, and created a poem with them, and it actually makes sense. I enjoyed your poem, keep up the good work! :)