Good poem well writen i liked this alot i give u a 5/5 stay strong n keep ya head up ~KRISTINA~

Wow that is a very strong and deep poem. it has alot of emotion put in it. i like the word choice u used and the flow was pretty good.u have a lot of talent so keep writing. 5/5
take care
angie

I loved the poem..no exactly what it feels like...yea my poem 'the fall' was true...life just sucks i guess...xoxoxox love georgia

Oh how true ..

My fave part was

'so why are you trying to make me stop
when this game keeps me alive
i love this game that i play
a game called suicide'

Although the last line might need another word added to it, caz when you read it .. the last line sort of sutts off .. rather than finishing with the beat ..

Otherwise .. Love it ..!

You have so much talent. another 5/5

Hey this poem was awesome it was so true
PEACE

*~*LiSsY*~*

This is another amazing poem!
i liked it alot...
you got the talent big time...

I love this.. your amazing...
i beleive in you... u have such an amazing talent at writing.

love sophie x