by Allison Jul 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Its now up to you |
This is a short poem, but you described how you are feeling really well. The flow is good and the rhyme added to the quality of the piece. Great work! keep it up--- |
by Catherine
There isn't much I can say about this poem, except that I like it. I wrote a poem similar to it. Check out 'We Are A Fairy Tale' and comment plz, you'll find it relates. |