Cool.. Deep.. Confusing.. lol.. So, are the 1st two lines sarcasm? Is Captivity the best thing? Sorry.. having a blonde day.. lol.. The rest of the poem, I found intriguing; where you were going, or trying to say. I got to the end and it left me wanting to smile.. to smile to hide the sorrow of still being here day after day.. Well done. 5/5. xx

Wow.. that is really good. I love the descriptions and the flow and rhythm was really good. great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

AWESOME!!! that's real deep. the binging it was going bad to worse.but there was a happy ending. cool poem:)