Sweet 16th Birthday

by Amanda   Jul 17, 2006


Happy Birthday to you Jade,
on this very special day,
Hope you have a good one,
Is what I want to say,

This is coming from me,
with much love to you,
To wish you all the best,
in all you want to do,

Hope it is full of magic,
and laughter everywhere,
Because you are so special,
and I will always care,

Happy birthday to you angel,
enjoy yourself and have a rest,
Out of all my friends,
you surely are the best!

Copyright 2006 - Amanda Linzi

My birthday poem for tomorrow becuase it is Jade's 16th Birthday

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  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Amanda --
    Again, this poem is great. I gave this one a 5/5 because it seemed to hold more deatil and imagery to it. The emotion, as well, was limitless. The rhyming was really simple, but who ever said good poetry needed complex rhymes? Not me! I think its really sweet that you wrote this for your friend, and I wish her a happy belated birthday.

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    What a lovely birthday present. You obviously think a lot of this person and it clearly shows.
    Nice cute write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    :) Cute. I bet she liked it, too. :)
    Everything goes together smoothely. Great job hunn.

    >black&&blue

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, she was probably blown away by this poem. I thought it was really good! A really nice Birthday wish for your friend.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    I thoght this poem was really good!! A nice short birthday poem for a friend!! I bet Jade loved it!!!Well Done 5/5!! Flow and rhyme were great!!! Keep it up!!!

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