Hey darl a beautiful poem for jade im sure shell love it. great job. keep it up =) hope u been good. xx

I thoght this poem was really good!! A nice short birthday poem for a friend!! I bet Jade loved it!!!Well Done 5/5!! Flow and rhyme were great!!! Keep it up!!!

Wow, she was probably blown away by this poem. I thought it was really good! A really nice Birthday wish for your friend.

:) Cute. I bet she liked it, too. :)
Everything goes together smoothely. Great job hunn.

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What a lovely birthday present. You obviously think a lot of this person and it clearly shows.
Nice cute write.

Amanda --
Again, this poem is great. I gave this one a 5/5 because it seemed to hold more deatil and imagery to it. The emotion, as well, was limitless. The rhyming was really simple, but who ever said good poetry needed complex rhymes? Not me! I think its really sweet that you wrote this for your friend, and I wish her a happy belated birthday.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood