Sadness

by loretta Taylor   Jul 17, 2006


Sadness

A chocking vine
Tears my soul
Deprives my mind
Strangles my heart
Ripping it apart

An ugly beast
Stalking me
Bearing teeth
Sharp talons
Won't let me free

Sadness
Be it beast or vine
Steal away
Precious time
Sadness you are
No Friend of mine

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  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    WOW!

    Descriptive!
    I love it!

    5/5
    xx Lolli xx

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Short / simple and yet so damn deep...thats what i call the art of poetry and u hv it all

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I like how you personified sadness. It's quite a gripping write in such a unique format. Keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is really good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, this was a weird format. ABACC
    I have never read anything like this before. But I guess any format doesn't really matter. But that was a good read though.

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