Not the best, I know.. but I was bored..

^^Whatever Mark. =P It was koolizm!!

I loved it. Seriously, I really did. I loved the chorus, I thought that was awesome. And the brigde was cool aswell. =D

Livin' the free life, I never had.

^^I really really really liked that line. I dunno why. It just kinda reminds me of shtuff. =) Awesome awesome awesome. !!!!!!

5/5 ..Keep it up Marrrrrrrk. =P

`Taleee. xx.

"Not the best, I know.. but I was bored.."

Puh-lease! It's fantastic and you know it!

"Walkin down the road, see your dreams,
No more stumbles, and no more screams."

I really liked those lines. =) ...They were muh favorite.

This is an awesome poem, Mark-Man. I get a little confuzzled in some parts.. but that's just because i'm a slow person. =P

Anywayzles. Keep up the great work! I love you. =)

OMG!! these lyrics are really good hun!!
you should consider writing some more.

i no i havent been to check your poems in a while but i do apologise lol.

speak 2 ya soon hopefully!!
love jes xxxxxxxxx