The Ending Of My Poor Daddy's Life

Very sad poem, hope it's not true though. The emotions were conveyed so well in this. It was stunning. A great piece indeed. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

That is really sad. Yet again, I hope that isn't true. If so, I am sorry. You are a great writer...Keep it up.

This poem..I don't even know what to say about it; other than it is really good. Sorry I couldn't leave a good comment but I just don;t know what to say about it.

>black&&blue

Hmm this was a sad write. I'm sorry if it's a true write, and I hope writing about it has helped. I think you told a good and as I've already said, a sad story.
I have to be honest now and say I found the rhyming to be a tad forced, therefore it could have been written better in my opinion.
My favourite part was the first stanza it gave a strong and fluent start to the poems story.
I wasn't too keen on the last stanza, for me the flow was lacking due to the lines been overall shorter.
A decent and touching write. Thanks for sharing.

I felt it ended kind of abruptly. But considering death is kind of abrupt, perhaps that's fitting. Good job.

Aww...im so sorry to hear thatt :S
Its well write but its a bit sad,,,I wouldnt know your pain,but i know that its hard to go throught...
Keep your heads up,and neven give up
Ur the best,u know it so :)

Cheer :)
Peace
Kly