Dear Razorblade...

by Lying To Live   Jul 17, 2006


Dear Razorblade

I still think its stupid
And I tried it for myself
You cut my flesh so deep
And it didnt even help

You werent here for me
When everyone else was there
They were the only ones
Who truly cared

You made me so miserable
Your touch brought me to tears
Locking in the memories
From all my horrible years

I should have talked about things
And thrown you right away
You trapped me in your web
Im still fighting to get free today

You never once did help me
We can no longer be friends
You just hurt me more
And now this is the end

Love Cutter XoX

P.S I told everyone about us
I got better right away
I shouldnt have to hide things
Every single day

This poem goes with my other poem ... Dear Cutter ... thanx for reading ...XoX

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Ohmigosh!!! I LOVED THIS POEM!!

    Dude, awesome flow, and rhyming was pretty rad. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great job. 5/5
    -Kakashi

  • 18 years ago

    by None

    I find myself constantly coming across poems like this one: set in a depressing tone, written in an immature manner, no original message or feelings, and boring to read from any perspective. I also find the same people commenting on poems like this. They leave comments that praise the poem, relate the poem to themselves or their lives in some way, and let you know just how great and fantastic it is.

    You must be told that: this poem is nothing original, I (and I am sure all of your commentators, and you as well,) have read poems exactly like this one. Depression is an overwhelming emotion. I am not arguing this, rather, I am telling you that everyone knows how it feels to be depressed. Since every person knows what sadness is, this emotion is most common. Your poem is just another title to add to a list- the list of poems that fail to express anything of interest.

    In order to make a statement with poetry, a poet should honestly try to be different. This poem fails to be different in a number of ways. I will not list those ways, but I am sure you are more than capable of pointing them out yourself. I will make one statement on the matter, though. You might be thinking that your poem deserves some kind of recognition for being unique in the only way I see- the fact that no one else had mixed certain words in the way you have, this poem is the first of its kind, verbally speaking, but it does not. Like I have stated already, it is merely just another poem.

    As for the commentators, I am having a problem with them. All sorts of poems that do not deserve praise recieve praise. I feel as though the worst of poets are being favored over the poets who use real skill in construcying poems. It is a shame all in its own.

    P.S. GREAT POEM!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Ok, this comment will go for both of the poems. Dear Cutter and Dear Razorblade.

    When I read the first one, I was a bit worried, and wondered if your really thought a razorblade would help. Before I wrote a commented, I decided to read the second part. It was a good thing I did, because I learned you know better. I'm glad you do, and I hope you mean what you say. Those two poems are a great inspirational write, and I hope 'cutter' will read it and learn from it. Excellent job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    So very relative to my life. i absolutely love it. really fascinating and well written. nicely set out too