Comments : I'm Back

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    You did a good job on this but it was very rocky at times. It wasn't a very smoothed out poem. Like everything rhymed except for the first thing:

    I close my eyes
    and see a face
    only this time..
    it's you instead

    But it is a good poem. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really like this. I can relate to it.. I love the way that you ended it. 5/5 Keep it up!