by Lady Vengeance Jul 17, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Drip, drip, drip, |
I liked this poem so much I had to read it again. It's definatly my favourite. I love how u start and end with th same line. And the imagery that this poem produces is incredible. I can't pick anything wrong in this poem. I love it. |
I like how you repeated the last and first line.. and I just really enjoyed reading it. It's different from what you normally read. Great job. |
by Gilligan
Man that really, really...it made me imagine an axe hit me in the face, good poem, creepy and graphic |
by Ozymandias
Very nice write. . Simple words, but a very eerie feeling to go along with it. I enjoyed reading it. |
^^^loved. sorry |