This poem actually gave me chills.
Great piece.
Kelly
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Wow...that poem gave me the creeps..it was really awesome.

I liked this poem very much. It was very original. There was only one line that I thought seemed out of place:

"The cracking sound of broken bone
A corpse in a glass case"

I think that the first part is a bit... I don't know how to put it... It didn't really go with it. Umm... Maybe try broken bones or a broken bone... I dunno... It's just kind of out of place... My favorite stanza was:

"A coldness takes over your skin
Although the water's warm
The glass heats up from showers mist
As droplets start to form"

Keep up the great writing. I think you deserve a 5/5. You have wonderful potential! :)

~BJ~

Wooowwww. Lol, well done Suzie Q ; )
i was sufficiently creeped out. lol, i love murders. well written, i enjoyed reading it.
-Brian W

-If you were alive, you know we'd kill you

Very powerful. This has to be one of my favorites from you. It was so deep and strong. The first half has amazing imagery and you could make the reader feel what you were describing, and the second half was just chilling, but well put together. Great! I loved it.

Damn i havent commented god whats with me?
anyway
I love this
But I'm worried bout you snoo
5/5
as always fabulous
~Emah
xxxooo

LMAO! You're worried about me??? ok, fair enough. i see your reasons. i'll be fine. everything seems creepier in the dark : D

It reminded me of one of those HORRIFIC scary movies. It was an excellent poem. I love it. I love the way you started it out with the drip, drip, drip and ended it that way too. The flow was great. I love it. Keep it up.

>black&&blue

Wow.... the imagery this creates is amazing, it's creepy, it really puts me into it. very very cool.
love ya

I got very confused here, I'm not to sure what exactly it is talking about, to me it seems like it changes up the topics but you do have a great imagination and it is very unique! great job

Chanelle--

Omfg. that was an absolutely amazing poem! that is all i can say.. absolutely amazing.. it sent chills up my spine with the use of descriptive words and your vivid imagination.. the repitition of "drip,drip,drip" was very effective and ended the poem well. nice job! 5/5

WOW nice use of imagination!!!

That was so effin creepy but I loevd it. I agree with everyone that was an amazing poem. I think you really captured the feeling of fear and I loved the emotion in this. It was great, there is nothing else I can say.
WOW
5/5
Breanna

^^^loved. sorry

Very nice write. . Simple words, but a very eerie feeling to go along with it. I enjoyed reading it.

Man that really, really...it made me imagine an axe hit me in the face, good poem, creepy and graphic

I like how you repeated the last and first line.. and I just really enjoyed reading it. It's different from what you normally read. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex

I liked this poem so much I had to read it again. It's definatly my favourite. I love how u start and end with th same line. And the imagery that this poem produces is incredible. I can't pick anything wrong in this poem. I love it.