Stripped Basic (Raped Raw)

by Kaylee   Jul 17, 2006


I've been stripped basic (Raped raw)
Unwanted nothing crouched naked.
Denounced in eyes (Hollowed eyes)
Of shadows passing through me.

I've been stricken scared (Terrified)
Sufficating on breath pushed in me.
Worthless howling creature (Pinned)
Trapped alone inside a coma state.

I've been whispered about (Often)
Bending head when I walked there.
"Is it true? I heard...." (No answer.)
Hiding behind shelves. Listening.

I've been betrayed (Called Drama.)
Unprotected, unloved, dirty, broken.
Being told I was lying. (Slapped hard.)
Refused to shed tears and appear lost.

I've been stripped basic (Raped raw)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sondos

    Wow that was amazing

    I love the way youve put this poem togethor. It really flowed

    Well Done

    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I really liked this poem it had such a strong emotional tie to it and very sad. However the brackets really kinda threw me off, and made it difficult to read. But all in all I think it was fairly good.

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not too bad. A strong poem with a nice message.. But something about it threw me off. I'm not sure what.

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Wow. The words you use make your feelings very clear. This has such power and anger. Again the use of brackets was wonderful and added an extra dimension to the whole thing. Absolutely brilliant. Can't fault it.

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Great another excellent poem! Your poetry is so very unique and different(I know I have already said that) but it is so cool! I love almost everything so far, I have to read it all twice just to reall and truely soak it up and understand it!

    Great write,
    -annmarie

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