End to my life

by brkendown   Jul 17, 2006


Cutting is my counseling
my only way of life
to feel the rush of adrenalin
as i pick up the knife
the pain that comes is like a drug
im always wanting more
this is my closely garded secret
held behind my bedroom door
no longer can i take this pain
no more my soul can take
no longer can i fake this smile
i have to have a break
but not a two week holiday
or a vacation by the sea
i mean a permanent place
somewhere i can become free
death my long awaited saviour
waiting patiently at my door
has herd my desperate plee for help
that i cant take it no more
so when i say im sorry
sorry for picking up the knife
you should know i dont really mean it
i chose to end my life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SJ

    Loved the last part. i can totally relate. the spelling mistakes sort of bugged me a bit but that's just because i'm a freak with that type of thing lol. except capitalization... ANYWAYS, keep on writing/typing/whatever-ing lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Sam

    I thought it was awesome it really meant something to me because i've been through this so thanx for writin this poem i thought it was very good but i noticed u used the same rhymes a couple times it would've been okay if u used the same ryhmes in a longer one but it just kinda seems a little repetitive but i still think it's a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by karen

    I love your work and the way you express your feelings. I feel this way most of the time, i dont know why. I guess its because i have so much negativity around me. If you want you can email at prieta130@yahoo.com

  • 18 years ago

    by x-aLeX bAbe-x

    Wow you really epressed in detail your emotions and i hope i can write as good as you one day its hard trying to express what you feel into words but i think you handled it well :) well done plz read some of my poetry an tell me what you think thnx xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    This is soo good its almost scary ur really talentedcan u check out sum of mine?

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