by MemoirsOfMe Jul 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I thought I had escaped, |
by Leslie
'My mind is a mystery I cannot solve.' |
by Kaila
Wow I loved this one it was amazing yet again! nice job! |
by Delie
Really good! love the symbolics! |
Wow-Amazing write! I love the rhyme in it and the emotion is perfectly described. My favorite part is the last two lines--They sum up the poem wonderfully---Great work-Keep it up-5/5 |
by Kayla
Great poem..You have excellent potential.. and also for bein young i know its hard writin sometimes..i know this cuz i am 15..ur poem is undescribably true...awesome poem..keep writing!! |