Oh my dang that brought me tears to my eyes im proud to be a mother

**NESSA**

Nice! i couldn't exactly tell where the stanzas started/ended, but maybe you intended to write it that way, eh?

anyways, i like it--it's very sweet!

DAMN DATS WASSUP!!!

NICE POEM

I loved your poem, very sad I started to cry, I have 3 little ones of my own and can't imagine not having them with me. Your poem is really great and it touched me.

Hey, i thought your poem was really great. one of the comments before was that you should change the form of the poem, but i dont think you should because it works wonderfully without it. almost like it is more like a story with a moral than a poem. its brilliant and very emotional. and true too.
Ginnie x

Dini this poem is to big just playing HAHAHA.