Nothing At All

by ~*Sachi*~   Jul 17, 2006


My pillow wet,
memories worn,
tears falling in rhythm,
heart mutilated and torn.

I hear them fight
about me.
Inside, I bleed,
full of controversy.

Between my pathetic
love-life and my
troublesome existence.
I sit and cry.

I need to think
things through
if I had time to,
but all I do, is rue

the day I lost you;
my heart, my soul.
I cry until I run out of tears
and cry blood. Nothing can fill this hole

of emptiness, only
getting bigger
with each passing day.
But I figure

feeling this way, the
sinking feeling when you fall,
is better than feeling
nothing at all.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tammy

    Awesome..very emotional..great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    Soo greeaat! its a very good poem.. but what do you seem so sad for? girl this is life.. and this is a chance to do whatever you want, or whatever you feel is right.. take care // Sara =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    WOW... is the only word that can describe how good this poem is! its sooo well written. it has lots of emotions all in some sentences.
    I loved this poem
    This one is one of ma favourite poems and also now ur in ma favourites list!
    Loved it!
    and ur work!
    Keep writing!
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetxMisery

    Wow I really like this one I especially like the part where you say "the feeling of falling is better than feeling nothing at all" thats soo true and I can relate. Its hard to be down but its even worse when your numb to pain.
    nice work=)

    -Kayla

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