My Loathed Love

by Kara !   Jul 17, 2006


I hate your earnest smile
And despise your robust laugh
I detest the way you look at me
With love brimming in your heart

I loathe your lustrous eyes
And tousled hair so fair
My insides writhe with fury
When I know that you are there

You wrap your arms so gently
Round my waist when we do kiss
You pull me that little closer
And I shudder from the bliss

You'll never steal my freedom
I see your promises are real
But when you give me adulation
I can't stand the way I feel

I hate that I am powerless
My facade you see right through
But what I hate the most

Is I'm truly in love with you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    What a lovely poem !! good job. Loved it.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    You need to change that first stanza. The way the whole thing is rhymed just makes it seem like it's part of a different poem. Otherwise this is brimming with passion and vitriol, and is evocative of emotions I have experienced which makes it easy to visualize.

  • 18 years ago

    by LovelyNumber143

    I know this feeling all too well.

  • 18 years ago

    by the pale queen of the silent night

    A poem that i haven't seen for so long..not many people have the passinet and vocabulary u have put into this poem.....its a peom worth reading and diffenitly worth the effort to write such a great work.........wish u all the best......

  • 18 years ago

    by Madison

    Lovely poem I'm going through the EXACT same thing right now!

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