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by midmid Jul 17, 2006 category : Love, romance / cyber love
Cold blood runs through veins in fire Red flowers bend in desire For your essence to respire Tears stream down and fill the ground Your pure scent with the air merges And from the ground it emerges And it each flower then urges To chant in angelic sound Songs that echo o’er long distance Setting each listening being in trance And confessing they no difference Between you and angels found
by Kara !
"Songs that echo oâ??er long distance" Needs sorting out, but that isn't your fault, obviously. I love the rhyming scheme you've used. And these lines: "Your pure scent with the air merges And from the ground it emerges" They're wonderful. A great piece. Well done. x