Comments : Cold blood

  • 18 years ago

    by Kara !

    "Songs that echo oâ??er long distance"

    Needs sorting out, but that isn't your fault, obviously.

    I love the rhyming scheme you've used. And these lines:

    "Your pure scent with the air merges
    And from the ground it emerges"

    They're wonderful. A great piece. Well done. x