by livingwith Jul 17, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Give me expression |
by sibyllene
I really like the beginning especially the first stanza- it has such a desperate tone (in a good way). some of your concepts also seem pretty original. the only line i don't really get is "so many things i ask, with a voice with words." but maybe that's just me. good job! |