another great Lawrence, another 5. you have portrayed all the subtle delicacys that love, two people in complete unison, brings. you love her, the `complete person`. you accept everything about her, warts and all as the saying goes. and she knows you inside out, `reading you like a book`. this poem to me is everything i want in a relationship. togetherness, understanding, a close bond. but ive saved the best for last. that 6th verse! you have said so much with so few words. i love the way she understands you better than you think. always mindful of your feelings, wants and hang ups even before you are!! well thats what the poem says to me anyway. thanks again L for your kind words. You say im sharp? that captured you midlaugh line is prob the most satisfying line iv ever written. and along you come and highlight it! must be very similar. keep up the good work top marks!!!

another great Lawrence, another 5. you have portrayed all the subtle delicacys that love, two people in complete unison, brings. you love her, the `complete person`. you accept everything about her, warts and all as the saying goes. and she knows you inside out, `reading you like a book`. this poem to me is everything i want in a relationship. togetherness, understanding, a close bond. but ive saved the best for last. that 6th verse! you have said so much with so few words. i love the way she understands you better than you think. always mindful of your feelings, wants and hang ups even before you are!! well thats what the poem says to me anyway. thanks again L for your kind words. You say im sharp? that captured you midlaugh line is prob the most satisfying line iv ever written. and along you come and highlight it! must be very similar. keep up the good work top marks!!!

whhoops liked it so much i said it twice!!! sorry, pressed the button accidently.(going redfaced)!!!

oh my god this was an amazing piece I ADORE IT :O that girl must be so lucky to have someone so loving as you, it seems like you two are in deep love, so good luck .... and hold on to love cuz love is precious....

hi everyone, thank you for stopping by. but as i wrote at the end of the poem, it came too little, too late. wish i had treasured more...

I love your poem and if a guy had wrote it for me i would be the luckiest girl in the world. Your a really great poetic writer keep it up. Who knows where this talent may get you.
Love Always,
Emily

this poem is absolutely beautiful..saw your comment on one of Craigs so thought I would check you out..just everything I wish a man would say to me....wowwwww. Luv Michelle

Damn good poem man! You certainly know wat your doing. Its great that you pay attention to all the little details man. Cuz to a girl, nothing is trivial. It all matters from the major things you do for her to the little things you described. Awesome!!!

-Seanny