by Sean Dohr Jul 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
My desires are beguiling, |
This flow is very nicely written and i love the chorus, your wording was very-well thought out and it made sense with the topic of the poem. great work 5/5 |
by HOLLY ARMER
Oooh, I like this. The flow is impeccible and your words kept me intrigued. Very nice. |