Tht wuz a good poem....i wonder if ppl can really do tht

There’s something really dark and cool about this one. I really loved the imagery and the words. It flowed nicely but somewhere in the middle it seemed a touch weird. Still really cool job. Loved the way the words worked to create something cool.
~Faith-less

Wow, I really like it. It paints pictures in my mind. I can see all the things you wrote about because you have such a way with words! 5/5