Very strong structure, rhythm and rhyme, tho its not very deep adn there are quite a few spelling mistakes. still, ur writing shows confidence and maturity

-biscuit-

"Tho there are quite a few spelling mistakes"....wtf? Shut up! Did you not see YOUR simple spelling mistakes, Biscuit head?! Geese, arrogant son of a -beep-.

But, for the most part, on the compliments, I agree with. It was a great poem, Geo. You're very insightful and loving and passionate about your writing and you can see it!! I love youuu!!

LMFAO. biscuit head!!!! GOD that made me laugh. ahhahaha.