by MeganLeigh Jul 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A girl cries as she stands in the rain |
Wow, this is totally great :) |
by Em
Excellent yet saddening write. Written well from start to finish. 5/5, Em |
by Kianna
Very very sad..i like it..tons of emotion |
by miracle
Amazing write as always....i love it verry sad but i love the question at the end leaves ppl woundering....i loved it....go you!! |
by SuperJenius
Great! I love how you question the possibility of who actually caused both to die. Nicely written and the rhyme was perfect, it wasn't forced and it worked well. I loved the poem! |