Wow...amazing poem! 5/5! keep it up....wow! that really was agreat poem!

That one was good, but sad.
5/5 keep it up
love,
lizeth

Omg!!! that was so awsome its not funny keep it up girl i cant believe your only 12 that was so awsome!!...thanx for commenting on my poem in it you sed the line"the dreams in which i died was the best i ever had" might hav been from a song. lol ye i got it from that it was the song i was listenin to at that moment :P i changed it a little but!! sorri if that annoys you in any way:P well once again great write ill be chekin out some other poems when you write em 4 sure
take care
lots of love
x x xmoniquex x x

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No, getting that line from a song doesn't annoy me. LOL. It just sounded familiar. Thank you all for your comments. They mean a lot to me!

Hey awsum poem, its flow and rhymes sooooo well, great job, id love to see more!, love mel

Wow-this is a great poem. It caught my attention at the very beginning and as I read I couldn't wait until I found out how the poem was going to end! It is very emotion and the flow and rhyme is perfect---You have a lot of talent so I hope you post some more poems! 5/5

If I had a hat... I'd take it off to you... You sure are intense for your age... Take care

Fantastic. You have a way with words. I hope you will be writing some more soon. I'd love to read them.. xx

I LOVE YOUR POEMS YOUR POEMS ARE NOT MY FAVORITE AND YOUR MY FAVORITE 12 YR OLD POET LOL

Your like WOW!!!! you have some talent girl so stick with poetry I was like getting ready to cry it touched me ALOT so hey give me a holla sometime I'm bi tho just thought I would let ya know

Omg!!! that poems has made me cry!! it is well good especially if you are only 12! Thanks for the comment on mine. This poem is truely awesome. I will add you to my favourites and check back soon when you have wrote some more. Take care and good luck.
Love from Anthea xxxx

W0ah i totally agree wid everyone else who commented on this poem, cuz it is a rite wikid poem! i felt this poem [not literally]made me sad =[

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Wow...that was really good...sad :-( but good. it really makes u think...thanx 4 u comments 2!! 5/5

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So good ^_^ love it

Wow this is amazing...u are so very talented hun...keep it up

YOU HAVE A LOT OF COMMENTS AND MiNE PROBABLY WON`T MEAN MUCH BUT THiS iS SOOOOO AMAZiNG! REALLY;; iT`S AMAZiNG! iT TAKES A LOT TO WRiTE SOMETHiNG LiKE THAT! THAT`S AMAZiNG!

-SHELBY-

Not going to say much, 5/5.
Like the plot, n u didnt force the rhymes, great job.
~Br0k3n

WOW, that was a great poem. You surely have a way with words.

Great! I love how you question the possibility of who actually caused both to die. Nicely written and the rhyme was perfect, it wasn't forced and it worked well. I loved the poem!

Amazing write as always....i love it verry sad but i love the question at the end leaves ppl woundering....i loved it....go you!!