That wuz amazin...u can see everything going on...it's a great poem...i luv it...

I can realy relate to this.Anyways great great great poem.

much love and depression,
Jubilee Dominguez

Great Flow.. U kept me intrested.. I can defenitly relate..
Just wrote my first poen take a look i want to see if its any good ... My sweet suicide...
xXKeep It UpxX

Very nice...u write good...and i can relate...well keep it up...write some more..cant wait to read them...5/5

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

That was so effing good