Wow... this is sad but also strong!! i really liked this last sentense.

But I am the only one to blame.

it made me to imagine your feelings again. well written!! Great job on this!!

It was good. Strong but the words are kinda like....basic...simple...plain. Needed something to really grip attention but yeah overall this was good. The fourth stanza was the coolest. Loved that one. So this was an okay write but not on the wow factor. Some good imagery.
~Faith-less

I am another failure,
Why do I resort to this?
I am a hypocrite, a liar,
Trying to hide my sins,
[I really liked that stanza, it felt like I could relate the most to it.]
I thought it was a really good poem, Steph. Just sad. I hope to god you don't honestly feel this way. I'm always here if you need me. =)

Anywho. 5/5 I thought you've done a great job on it! Keep it up!

`Taleee. xx.

Hey its a good poem... I know how you feel but your not the one to blame. No one is
Katie

Very powerful! You are very talented! I loved the poem. It was very sad, indeed, but very well-written! It was original. You have a wonderful talent! Keep writing! Overall rating: 5/5. My favorite stanza was:

"I am another failure,
Why do I resort to this?
I am a hypocrite, a liar,
Trying to hide my sins,"

~BJ~

Quite good.
Again no complaints.
5/5
~Emah

Nice poem, the rhymes were...basic. But great job anyway

Wow, another sad poem. It's a vicious cycle when you start cutting. You cut because you hate yourself, and you hate yourself because you cut. There is no end to it, until the day something goes wrong. Stop. Please stop. Before it gets worst. I wish you all the best, and I hope things get better. It's hard, but try.

God this is excellent! Anyone that downrated you should be shot.. I loved this, just loved it.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5