It's So Sad...

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Jul 17, 2006


It's sad really, how
kids are running around like robots
buying all this and that
spending over 100 bucks
for the 'stylish new hat'

It's sad really, how
being a clone seems to be the trend
thats lasted for all of time
follow the leader, forget your true self,
don't you dare step out of line

It's sad really, how
girls outfits seem to be shrinking,
for all the guys to drool
and all those popular, rich b.tches
seem to be ruling the schools

It's sad really, how
All because of their daddy's money ,
these girls get to be the *best*?
to pick whos worth the time of day
and to torment the rest.

It's sad really, how
no one can show their true colors,
instead they *have to have* that sweater,
from abercrombie and finch
and they dont even know any better.

It's sad really, how
i seem to be the only real person,
the only one who seems to realize
how every trendy b.tch is f.cking fake,
and how M T V is telling everyone stupid lies .

Need help with title!! Merci!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I loved it, and lauren, it is like mine, a bit.
    well done, it was really truthful and sad. keep writing
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Finally, I'm not the only one who goes through the school day tihnking the same sh!t about them. I love this poem. I love it so...

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I think this poem is written so nicely with great talent.you have done a wonderful job here, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Great poem, i always find that titles are better when they are simple and relate obviously to the poem so somethign like
    'its sad' or
    'sad really'
    would be quite effective, remember you want it to be short and sweet, giving a taste of the poem so that people read it, rather than very extravagent which often takes the focus off teh actual poem!

    neway, the thing i really like about this poem is how it doesnt follow a rigid structure and yet it still flows really well, the repetition of 'its sad really how' is definately a strrong feature of this poem. it really keeps it all together.

    -biscuit-

  • 18 years ago

    by Connie

    I really like your poem ~ what a terrific (and true) message!!! As for a title, I really don't have a suggestion - other then several have already posted some excellent ideas!

    Again, I reall did enjoy your poem, and the message!

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