Wow one of the few poems that bring me to tears. Amazing although devastating.

xoxoxo Haley

Wow. Stay strong hun. This poem awed me! It dragged me in from the title and blew me away at the end. Stay strong sweets.

Take Care
5/5
xxlollixx

Sar, this is a really strong poem. At first, I didn't want it to rhyme but by the end, I realised how well it worked. You have definitely captured the moment and the diffused pain that was shared by all buy beared by you. Stay strong kid and keep writing!
Love ya sis.

Ouch.......reading ur poem is like seening the image..........iam so sorry to hear,,sorry beyound word but wat u have written is very strong...I wished it to be fiction..but u wrote its a true story....its very sad...i can truely feel the pain...May god bless you.............
keep the good work up..writing helps...

I read this poem because of the title.. i didnt no it woudl be so sad.. im sory this happened to u .. sometimes bad things happen to good people.. xxxxx

Omg that is SO amazing. i read it in the contest thingy and i HAD to tell you. this is one of the most amazing poems like EVER! wow. im so sry:(

This is a fantastic poem. I am sorry for what you went through and what life in the future will be like without him with you. Hope to see more of your poems.
Jade x

Omg, that is horrible, i hope your ok!, the poem i wrote wasnt about me,it was about my friend whos grandmother just died,they were close, but thank you, I hope everything works out ok with you.

Hey Im sorry for your loss, Things are just so unexpected and I hate it! I recently lost my friend and its really hard!

-shocked- only someone like you could care mostly about him but i care too. i am so sorry for your loss. xox i hope your ok!
great poems very touchy and sad but shows how much you care.
xoxroxyxox

I'm not sure I've ever read anything so powerful. Sad but extremely well written.