The last two lines were the ones that really pop out at you--you and doug have ways with words! this was beautifully written and the emotion behind it was overwhelming.
and, as always, you're endings are strong and powerful!

Loved it very much! I tried to find some mistakes but none! I think this my favourite poem (from the poems written by you) Beautigful piece of writing!
Take care and keep writing
xx

Beautiful* damn i made a mistake myself!

Awww sorry this happened good poem xxx