Should I

by Brittini   Jul 17, 2006


Should I listen to those cruel words that people say
Let them stain my soul and break down my day
With the more words they say the more I believe
Word by word it gets to me

Should I surround myself with so called friends
When all they say and do is to hurt and offend
With the more they say the more I fell pain
Word by word my soul becomes stain

Should I let these People tare me apart
Let them rip away at my bleeding heart
With every lasting word by word I hear
My true self's life's end comes to a near

Should I let these cruel words change who I am
Let them make me feel like I can't attain my own perfection
With the more they say with the more words that speak
Each word by word each lie I do keep

Should I let them do all this to me
Let this change my life and make me feel unworthy
No, but the real question is how
For I feel like it's too late now

As I let myself fall into this false trance
With the feeling that I have no chance
I met you who live far by many miles
But now on my face I find these smiles

Should I let those people tell me what to do
No not now since I have now met you
For some reason I can tell you everything
And I'm not hiding my true self-being

This is my way of saying thanks from the bottom of my heart
Without you I would still be being torn apart
So thanks once again
I am glad I can call you my friend

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    I found this piece also nice. But there is room for improvement like changing this line
    "My true self's life's end comes to a near". With the syllabic count, the flow is affected, you need to revise this line to make it flow better. If you need help I can also suggest how you could do that. But you must try first and let me know.

    However your poem is worth 5/5.

    TC With love
    Fsams

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