I like this poem. Very good.

I like how you used 'thee' to rhyme with 'me' . . . as i mentioned before, i forget on whose poems, i always get my thees, thys, thous, thines all mixed up, but i enjoy reading poetry using those terms--it makes it seem magical.
great work, mike! you've definitely created magic, here!

Great poem! I loved it like i love all of your poems. I liked the ending very much!
Keep writing
xx

Great poem! I loved it like i love all of your poems. I liked the ending very much!
Keep writing
xx

Great poem! I loved it like i love all of your poems. I liked the ending very much!
Keep writing
xx

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Wowwwwww Romantic poem.
you did good job.