Hey ooh wow.. i know how this goes.. im in love w/ someone who has a girl friend.. but this guy is like my best friend.. i know it wont work out b/c of our friendship... and also b/c like 2 years ago.... in september i found out he liked me and i didn't really know him so i got to know hima nd then october 1st came ( my birthday) he wanted to come so i gave him my address.. and when he got there my other best friend told him to ask me out as my birthday present and he said.." no i came over here to tell her im over her and i just want to be friends.. really good friends... i like ashley"( one of my other friends..)
so yeh he ruined my party.. and it sucked !!! but idk just hang in there and if you can get as close to him as you can... but anyways....
great job... keep it up!!!
oxoxoxox
kayla

Dont give up yet, that birthday present will come someday. great poem! i luv the way u write. luv ya!

Aw this is REALLY good!! u have an amazing talent w/ words!!!! 5/5 for sure!!
thanx for my comment(i pray)

jenie

Aww this was so simple but cute and sad in a way. I loved the ending line and the title. Beautiful way to put it. Thank you for your comment on my poem! Keep it up! 5/5

I can relate to that poem very well written well done 5/5

I really like this poem. its very good

Your poems are pretty great also! Thanks so much for your comment...and yah things have to get better eventually

I can relate to it, too. It's very deep; touching. Great job.

-Lor

I like a lot this poem because i know what you felt when you wrote it.congratulations,you have done a great work.best regards,michelle XxX