Dead-Deep-Inside

by LadyPearl   Jul 18, 2006


* Does not refer anyone but a certain person* Letter Form

Dear former Proud Solider,

You say you're glad I have my views
Yet at the same time you disrespect me
I have my reasons, you have yours
Why don't you let go and let me be

You warned me to change my opinion
Or else you'll keep on downvoting me
Is that what you call respect my dear
Do you wish my heart to feel guilty too?

Let me say this you patriotic poet
You a proud soldier should know better than this
To pick an argument with someone younger than you
Something in your life must be amiss

If you are proud, you should have more respect
Than trying to force one person to change
A 25 year old person should have some life
A family, a job, some kind of life arranged

You say my poems are immature
But I truly doubt you read them all
And interpreted what each one mean't
There's more life than who we are

I'm sorry if you can't find forgiveness within
I'm sorry if you still hate me for Me
I will not, cannot change who I am
Forget this madness and let everything just be

*Seriously, you're 25, you shouldn't be worrying about some "kid" 10 years younger than you. If you hate me for my opinion on bush, you would be hating a lot more people.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Priest

    I read on the fourms what you said about this "Dead-Deep-Inside" Person and I read your poem now. It seem some people have nothing better to do then be total jerks to other people.
    It's happened to me many times, and will problly still do so. I most say I like your peoms. They may not be to some peoples likes but they are to mine. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Lol i just read this so you already know what i think.
    thanks for entering.
    ~emah

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    You poems arent immature!!!!!!
    OMFG
    that kid should be shot.
    lol
    anywho i probably wont be able to comment on all these straight away but yeah.
    its excellent
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Speakin the truth. Someone of that age should have better things to do! And you shouln't hate someone because their opinion is different then yours, if you do then you'll never have any friends... Another great poem Noni! Please keep on putting up your poems, so I can keep reading them! =)

    Ravyn

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