It's indignant that I put so much faith,
Into something that doesn't exist.
That I relied on you so willingly,
I just should have ignored your so-called bliss.
[I really really really like that stanza. It stood out ALOT to me.]
I thought it was a pretty good poem. It felt a little rocky at the start but once it got to the stanza that I put above it felt like it got much stronger. Also, great use of vocab. It was beautiful. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Sweetie, this poem was great. It got a point across to the way people want to be accepted, be it as a Christian or not. I myself am a Christian, and I still think you're a wonderful person, would I like for more people to be Christians? yes, but I'd never change my veiw on a person because of their religion. You might hate hearing this, but God does love you and He will answer you even when you don't think He will. I'll pray that you get through whatever is hurting you. You have a great writing talent and you don't deserve a life of pain and doubt...Your poem was beautiful...the ending was marvelous.

This is a very powerful poem with brilliant flow and amazing structure, it rhymes well and delivers a unique message
xx

Very very kool. I totally love it. Such a strong view and opinion, i'm glad u chose to voice it out loud : )

Hmm, that was a very strong poem, and a really different point of view. Although I don't agree with what you have to say, I do respect it. Everyone has their own views, this one does not fancy mine. I understand an athiest's point of view, but I think it's pathetic. No offence or anything, I just don't 'believe' what they have to say.

I love the write and the words you used it was great...I myself am a Christian but that doesnt change my thoughts about you or who you are but you should know that When you prayed to GOd if you did? and you didnt hear him or get the answer you wanted..you have to look around..becuase he always answers just in different ways and he might of been speaking through other people but u didnt want to notice it ..ne ways God Bless and I'lll pray that you find what is reallly true..

God Bless

-CHris

"It didn't faze me when you never answered,
I was just solitary all those melancholy times.
Because, in fact, you never did say,
"We'll get through it," as you desiccated my eyes."

I liked those lines. And although i don't agree with this poem, it was very well written, and it flowed really well. Great work

--Steph

This is a terrific poem. It was well structure and dealt with a somewhat sensitive topic in an academic rather than emotional way. People often write poems denouncing God from a very emotional stance so it is refreshing to read a more reasoned approach. I feel the sadneess expressed in some of the lines especially the last line where you can only whisper you are an Atheist.

"faze" should be "phase".

I really like this poem. I can relate a lot to the message it sends, the disappointments of belief, let downs, etc. Whether or not you're really an Atheist or not, you portray it well. Great job.

An atheist is someone who doesn't believe in God, but if you are showing this guilt and fear, it's probably because you know he's there.
I think that sometimes he doesn't divide the happiness and answers equally between us, but they are still there.

The weakest are the toughest.

//T.L.//

P.s. No offense meant at any time.

Before I read htis poem, I checked out your age. I'm impressed to say the least. You expressed yourself well, and if people don't agree with your poem, they should leave that out of their comments and rate it for what it is: A poem. An expression of thought. Yes, I might not agree but I'm open minded to people. I like your words, meaning, how you use some new ones that make you stand out from writers of your age. I like how you don't seem to care or at least I felt that. You are what you are.

That's funny cuz i totally feel the same way. i'm Atheist myself.. used to be mormon. this poem described everything i felt. it's pretty strong. your a great writer. keep up the good work and don't let people put you down.

Excellent. I love that your strong in who you are. that shows ao much in your words its awesome. good for you!
I have a couple friends who are athiests but not all of them have the nstrength of mind to stand up for their non belief

I just wanted to tell you I miss talking to you and reading your new poems, please contact me when you can. I feel like I've lost a friend :(. Like I said before, beautiful poem, I loved it. I may not be an athiest, but I loved it, you have the right to be who you are and I accept you 100%. You're a wonderful person and a magnificent writer!

!!! that poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it
Its poems like these that make me happy I happened to come upon them
Great job and keep writing porfavor (please, haha)

If you could please read/rate my poem Classic Love Song, I appreciate it
I return the favor if you comment back

Wow
wow
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!!!!!!!!!!!! this is so good, and i mean,
everyone could understand this, no matter whether they're religous or not.
hope ya comment on mine.
luv gabriella

Woah were do you get all these emotions hun?? I loved this poem so expressive and free! and just wow! It was absolutly, positively, amazingly, AMAZING!!

No preaching here! I'm an Agnostic myself, but I deeply respect who you are and you depicted your feelings very well in this poem. I really enjoy your poems, you're very talented! Once again, 5/5!

~jas~

I still love to re-read your work my dear. I love every word of your poems. I wish you'd start posting again. Your words have always been amazing and wise.
<3Raych