Can't you try?

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Jul 18, 2006


Written for that Ottrave Rima contest or however you spell it:D

Sadness controlling my mind every day,
Ever since you left, I can't hardly think.
You have turned my life into skies so gray.
As I hide my tears, with a constant blink.
I have nothing to do, nothing to say,
As I wash my endless tears down the sink.
I am not sure anymore about you,
All I know is that I won't say "ado"

One day you'll realize what you've done to me,
But I won't be here anymore, to cry.
I will move on in time, but can't you see?
I don't want to ever! Can't you just try?
I want you and me to become happy.
Please baby, just give me a single chance,
Just one time, give me a chance for romance...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    I know the feeling... I really had an anger towards my last bf... He treated me like trash when we broke up, and even tho I loved him b4, I knew I had 2 let him go.

  • 18 years ago

    by Destiny

    Yeah this is sad, but like at the same time it's kinda cute in a weird way lol.
    Keep writing, you're good:-)