Trapped in the Wake of a Dream

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Jul 18, 2006


Trapped in the wake of a dream, I can't get out,
Stuck in the darkness as I cry and pout.
When suddenly, your face appears, as you come to me,
You tell me "it'll be alright" as you hold me tightly.

You pick me up, and sweep my tears from the floor,
Grab my hand and pull me towards this large door.
I ask him what it is; he says, "Just wait my sweet"
As he picks me up off of my feet.

Pushes me in, back into the darkness,
I cry out as I see light less and less.
Trapped again, it's De Ja Vu,
I'm stuck in the darkness, because of you...

~*Who Cares?*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    When suddenly, your face appears, as you come to me,
    You tell me "it'll be alright" as you hold me tightly.

    This didn't flow.

    And the poem didn't seem to finish, to me... I do, however, like the rhyming scheme.

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Great Poem. Kinda Leaves me wondering.

    Thanks for the comments on my poem. It was a wierd thing to write, but thanks again. So very much appreciated.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Hmmm.
    its quite good.
    thanks for entering
    ~Emah

  • 18 years ago

    by Destiny

    Hey I like this poem...It's like catchy, lol.
    Pretty sad, though...

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