Hey I like this poem...It's like catchy, lol.
Pretty sad, though...

Hmmm.
its quite good.
thanks for entering
~Emah

Great Poem. Kinda Leaves me wondering.

Thanks for the comments on my poem. It was a wierd thing to write, but thanks again. So very much appreciated.

When suddenly, your face appears, as you come to me,
You tell me "it'll be alright" as you hold me tightly.

This didn't flow.

And the poem didn't seem to finish, to me... I do, however, like the rhyming scheme.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5