Please

by Destiny   Jul 18, 2006


This is actually supposed to be a song I wrote, but I guess you could look at it like a poem...

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People talk like they understand
People talk like they know my secret
People know I try to keep it
They'll never realize what this means
They'll never realize what I'm trying to say
{Supposed to be chorus}
Please don't touch me anymore
Please don't talk to me anymore
Please don't pretend like you're perfect, like you don't have something to hide...

And I wanna run away from you
And I wanna put you in what I've been through
And I wanna hear I'm sorry
for what I did
I'm sorry for this
I'm sorry for this

People talk
They just talk
They know I'm not okay
Today wasn't a good day
But they don't know why I'm how I am

Please don't touch me anymore
Please don't talk to me anymore
Please don't pretend you're perfect
Please don't pretend you don't have something to hide
Like you know I'm alright
Like you know how I feel inside

Please don't touch me anymore
Please don't look at me anymore
Please don't pretend like you don't remember what you did

XxX

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  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    This had great rhythm I could almost hear the music. Just reading it I think it relied on please a little to much but as a song I see it working well.

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl lot of emotion in this poem. very touching i lke how uve worded it. good work. thank u for ur comment on my poem. meant alot xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kerry

    Great poem/song. Is there anyway I can use it in my band? 5/5 anyways...I hope you continue to write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow gr8 work! thnx for the comments. i like the emotion in this, it was good 5/5