by Destiny Jul 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
This is actually supposed to be a song I wrote, but I guess you could look at it like a poem... |
This had great rhythm I could almost hear the music. Just reading it I think it relied on please a little to much but as a song I see it working well. |
by dora
Hey darl lot of emotion in this poem. very touching i lke how uve worded it. good work. thank u for ur comment on my poem. meant alot xx |
by Kerry
Great poem/song. Is there anyway I can use it in my band? 5/5 anyways...I hope you continue to write. |
Wow gr8 work! thnx for the comments. i like the emotion in this, it was good 5/5 |